As for the Joe Wright version of P&P, there was so much I enjoyed about the production (not the least of which was Matthew Macfadyen’s intense portrayal of Darcy :-). I found this a great book for the beginner screenwriter and intermediate screenwriter. also highlights the importance of genre, specifically the top ten genres, like Dude With a Problem, Fool Triumphant, etc. However, as said by a lot of people below, his criticisms of movies can get pretty awkward (like saying "screw Memento", then praising Legally Blonde), especially when he starts praising his own films which I saw a couple times on Disney Channel when I was eight. It is very interesting that the Beat Sheet can be applied to a novel of over 200 pages as well as a screenplay of 110 to 120 pages. Any story idea what if with a character or a situation can create a Single Line Logline Story Concept by adding in a compelling desire. Nothing. 13. I've thought repeatedly about 1) ALL STORIES ARE ABOUT TRANSFORMATION, and 2) his advice to make characters' drives primal: rooted in survival, hunger, sex, protection of loved ones, fear of death. The book also shows you how to focus on making your story marketable to agents/publishers/producers. Your Logline Template for Each Save the Cat!® Genre Jose Silerio , July 1, 2016 4 min read 15897 Our workshops are always a great place to “test the waters” of an idea to see if there really is a story lurking in the shadows awaiting to be told – and told in the best way possible. * Memento is in ABSOLUTELY NO WAY the lesser film. Elizabeth has learned that HE was the one who found Lydia and paid Wickham off to marry her. Blake Snyder made it easy to follow. According to Snyder's model, they are "rites of passage" stories. My year of listening to the Harry Potter series has gotten me really interested in story structure. I found The Plot Whisperer: Secrets of Story Structure Any Writer Can Master by Martha Alderson and Take Off Your Pants by Libbie Hawker more useful. For instance, in a romantic comedy, this is where the two love interests clash. That makes so much sense and really explains what I like to write and wh. We all have our own private shelves—literally or figuratively—that feature these memorable examples of storytelling. Save the Cat!®Story Cards. Speaking of channeling JA, I wonder what you think of Emma Thompson’s adaptation of S&S, and did you ever see her glorious Golden Globe speech where she read aloud a note she had written from JA’s pov about the evening? She directed the award-winning documentary, "What's Eating Ralphie May?" Goes to the Movies Save the Cat Goes to the Indies Blakes Blogs, Save the Cat!® Live Storytelling Workshops, Save the Cat!® Online Storytelling Courses, Software Inquiries:  tech@blakesnyder.com, Workshops & Script Analysis:  cs@blakesnyder.com, I have read and agree to the terms & conditions. Even the non-creative side is uninspired rehashes of common sense advice (F, Hack advice given by a hack writer. And it’s a happily ever after ending for those characters who have earned it. What about a painter whose portfolio only inspired shrugs? I think this book is "ok", hence the two star rating. Thanks so much, Jakki!! Lovely Marilyn, I have always wanted someone to break down P&P for me. Since all it says on the tin is "love" and "laughs", the genre provides large meadows for the screenwriters to frolic in. Hungry Katniss Everdeen had planned to kill a cat but saves it because her sister Prim begs her. Everybody has their own process and there is never just one right way to plot a story, but this made me realize how much easier life would be if I followed a few hard plotting rules. Cassie, I’m so glad you liked the beat sheet! Thanks for the great BS2, and congratulations on writing ten novels! Even though it had nothing to do with Austen, I thought it was so delightful. Has anyone used this book to improve his fiction, non-fiction or poetry? Actually, he knows seven things about romantic comedies. Snyder's beloved Save the Cat! This has changed how I look at compelling characters. If you didn't like a novelist's stories, would you follow their advice in crafting your own? : The Last Book on Screenwriting You'll Ever Need and its sequels have guided screenwriters, novelists, and other creative thinkers for years and continue to be bestsellers. Grace, thank you so much! It’s heartbreaking. Screenwriter Ben Frahm offers his take on the indie hit '(500) Days of Summer.' Janice Hardy is the award-winning author of the teen fantasy trilogy The Healing Wars, including The Shifter, Blue Fire, and Darkfall from Balzer+Bray/Harper Collins. Really enjoyed this, Marilyn. Now that I look back on my review, I really do sound like I absolutely hate this book, but I do not. Jane Austen told the story so well, she made it easy for me to break it down . However, as said by a lot of people bel. job at trying to explain it. Absolute nonsense. Cat Rhinehart, Writer: Brand New Old Love. =). I stumbled on this series and, though it's about screenplays, not novels, it's got some really solid story and revision advice (regardless of the cheesiness of Blake Snyder's own scripts). Goodreads helps you keep track of books you want to read. Director: Mel Brooks | Stars: Mel Brooks, John Candy, Rick Moranis, Bill Pullman Votes: 171,422 | Gross: $38.12M ), Now, four years later, I’m celebrating the release of my seventh novel, Pride, Prejudice and the Perfect Match, which is the first book since my debut to give such an obvious nod to my literary idol. Anyway, thanks for your wonderful comments! Lady Catherine surprises Elizabeth with a visit, demanding that she stop pursuing Darcy. principles. This is definitely full of useful advice. Stories that influenced the very worldview of that writer-to-be by stamping it with an indelible impression of skillfully paced plots, believable motivations, insightful characterizations, clever subtexts, and compelling themes. What is wrong, this guy holds his opinion too (pardon me) damn high. 14. Are you stumped by story beats? Meanwhile, Bingley suddenly returns, seeks out Jane and, eventually, proposes. I’m glad you didn’t think I missed any important turning points. Lydia lets a secret slip—Darcy was with them in London—which makes Elizabeth crazy with curiosity. A cohabitation comedy about a ghost and an exorcist who is a 17-year-old boy with the ability to see and hear ghosts. Marilyn, I’ve changed the photo caption to point out where you’re standing! In "Cats," she'll play Bombalurina, a flirty cat who loves to be the center of attention. Nothing. Elizabeth, who has already met the cunning but charming officer Mr. Wickham (also the son of Darcy’s late father’s steward—follow that? The book also shows you how to focus on making your story marketable to agents/publishers/producers. Doesn't matter if it's a comedy like "Elf" or a drama like "Pulp Fiction" you must have this moment. Mr. Darcy and the Bingley sisters persuade Mr. Bingley to leave town, and Jane, in hopes of crossing paths with him again, leaves as well to stay with relatives in London. For me, it’s a double celebration. Personally I loved it and think it’s basically a perfect film. That I should even have to point this out is insulting to me as a reader and cinephile.). Exactly--to the minute. That being said, though, Blake Snyder will teach you a micro-managed form of it that forces you to meet a very specific and frankly obnoxious rubric. While this book is a clever and succinct reduction of Hollywood story structure, it is not well-served by its snarky, priggish author, who with every page radiates the very same sort of smug, too-cool attitude that the rest of the world associates with Los Angeles. something approaching "acceptable") to have it examined by a competent writer. Cat Rhinehart is a Los Angeles-based writer and director. This ultimate insider's guide reveals the secrets that none dare admit, told by a show biz veteran who's proven that you can sell your script if you can save the cat! After being raised Southern-Baptist in Atlanta, Georgia, Cat took off to NYC where she studied film production at Brooklyn College. Debate: Others may disagree with me on this point (so feel free to counter), but I’d argue that the A Story is all about Mrs. Bennet wanting to marry off her daughters and the debate here is a series of discussions from the perspectives of multiple characters regarding the nature of courtship and marriage. Storyte, Congratulations to our Save the Cat! Anyway, I digress. These criticisms are not unjustified. We then encounter the object of Mrs. Bennet’s interest, Mr. Charles Bingley, who is in attendance with his snobbish sister Caroline, his other snobbish sister and her husband and, most interestingly of all, his best friend. But in the end of the day, this rant is nothing but a rant. Here, Have a scene in your script with an ungodly amount, Save the Cat! She makes a choice to visit Jane, who has fallen ill during a lunch date with Bingley’s snobbish sisters, and she must brave the irritations of Darcy and Caroline in order to give comfort to her dearest sister. It doesn’t have any of the complicated conceits which abound in (500) Days of Summer. She’s a cinematic treasure. A star pilot and his sidekick must come to the rescue of a Princess and save the galaxy from a ruthless race of beings known as Spaceballs. It won the Achievement Award at the 2012 Newport Beach Film Festival and was nominated for the Grand Jury Prize at the 2012 Sundance Film Festival . Thank you very much for the excellent analysis. Don't let the fact that it's aimed at screenwriters push you away, authors! Not worth all the hype though. 10. People quickly became very engrossed in this modern-day romance, especially thanks to the references to Love, Simon, a 2018 romantic comedy about a closeted gay teen trying to find out the identity of a classmate with whom he has fallen in love online. This is a "how to" handbook, targeting aspiring screenwriters, composed by a man who actually has some track record in writing comedy scripts for Hollywood. And now she’s writing a new version of Peter Rabbit! There are. All Is Lost: GASP! I have yet to try the latter, but I know if I ever did that I would really appreciate having the BS2 as a structural tool. He storms off and writes a long letter to Elizabeth, explaining that Wickham is a really bad guy. That said, this is a Hater’s guide to his book, Save the Cat, in case you ever have to quote anything about it to someone who’s taking it way too seriously. ), though to me it was so sublimely written that I think JA herself might have quietly applauded. Mr. Collins proposes to Elizabeth. Just when both she and Darcy had finally escaped their pride/prejudice toward each other, they are torn apart. The most interesting discovery for me? I know you’ll have a wonderful time, though, and truly appreciate the good wishes. He entertains even as he shares tips on structure and character and little, memorable bits such as his "Save the Cat" and "Keep the Press Out" slogans. Welcome back. Dark Night of the Soul: Elizabeth must return home, knowing that Lydia’s actions will forever tarnish the reputation of her family and that Darcy wouldn’t want anything to do with her now. The movie world is a crazy and unpredictable world, and this book does an o.k. Less of a shock is that she immediately refuses him, citing his interference in her sister’s romance with Bingley and his nastiness to “poor Mr. Wickham.” Let’s just say, none of this is how Darcy imagined things would play out. Although written for screenwriters, any kind of story writer can benefit. Elizabeth is seriously confused. None of Swift's movie appearances have received top marks from critics, but her worst-reviewed film to date is "Valentine's Day," a romantic comedy that follows different couples as they get ready to … Comedy, Romance, Thriller, etc. His book, Save the Cat! I’m not here to disrespect the man. Some called the book “highly imaginative.” Others called it “weirdly psychotic.” (I’m kinda biased, so I’ll let you decide. and then praises miss congeniality as a great movie the very next page. 9. The promise of the premise is in full swing here with marriage proposals, sudden departures, rampant social gossip, and rakish men. I could really believe that line about her dress being “six inches deep in mud” after her walk to Netherfield, LOL. Blake Snyder is supposedly “Hollywood’s most successful spec screenwriter.” I don’t know how that works exactly, since he has exactly two IMDB credits (for Blank Check and Stop or My Mom Will Shoot), but whatever. I was hoping some of her brilliant writing vibes would rub off… . Good luck with everything. Sensitive,' using the tried and true STC! Her second published novel—that work of staggering genius we know as Pride and Prejudice—turns 200 years old on January 28th. I'm not a screenwriter, I'm a novelist, and I tell you, this book has shed some light on so many things that I was aware of, but most times fobbed off. Catalyst: Darcy scoffs at the idea of dancing with Elizabeth, no matter how fervently his good-natured buddy implores him to do so. Nothing. OUT OF THE BOTTLE (OOTB) WISH, SPELL, LESSON. Hack advice given by a hack writer. It’s always both fun and a learning experience when author Marilyn Brant is our guest blogger: If you stroll through the childhoods and young adulthoods of future writers, you’ll always find a unique set of novels and/or films that left a particularly strong mark. The Switch – This comedy starting point has antecedents in stories like “The Prince and the Pauper” and the movie, Trading Places. When Darcy proposes a second time, Elizabeth accepts with pleasure. This story is a contemporary romance about an ER doctor and a single mom who cross paths on an Internet dating site. The Basic Story Beats are from a screenwriting book called “Save The Cat” by Blake Snyder. It is a terrible match, but it is the only thing that can be done to save the family’s reputation. If your only two credits for screenwriting are "Blank Check" and the so-bad-Sylvester-Stallone-apologized-for-his-role-in-its-creation "Stop Or My Mother Will Shoot", you have no place writing a book on the subject. I don’t think I’ve missed an Emma Thompson movie. Blake Snyder (October 3, 1957 – August 4, 2009) was an American screenwriter, consultant, author and educator based in Los Angeles who, through his Save the Cat trilogy of books on screenwriting and story structures, became one of the most popular writing mentors in the film industry. Hope you have a fabulous weekend, too! Set-Up: We get to know the Bennet clan, particularly sweet/beautiful Jane and witty/opinionated Elizabeth, as they interact as a family and go to the Meryton Ball—the first of the major balls in the novel. You did an excellent job. Elizabeth is wiser now and distances herself from Wickham and his Darcy-bashing speeches. Not just a save the cat/good hero moment but also foreshadows Katniss taking Prim’s place in the Hunger Games. We all know, though, that the course of true love (or carefully plotted fiction) will never run that smoothly…. The only thing I would add is to Charlotte- in addition to finding a respectable husband when she is well “on the shelf” she also gains for herself the respectability and social status of a married woman- a condition not to be sneezed at in Regency times! Even the non-creative side is uninspired rehashes of common sense advice (Find decent criticism! Opening Image: Mrs. Bennet, a Regency-era mother to five single daughters (Jane, Elizabeth, Mary, Kitty, and Lydia, in order of age), is yammering on and on to her husband about how a new eligible and wealthy bachelor just moved into the neighborhood. His book Save the Cat! There was a lot of youthful energy in that adaptation, and I thought the main characters seemed to be the ages they were intended to be. Are you coming to the STC event in Burbank on 01.26.13? 7. Writes a Novel” applies Snyder’s principles to novel writing with examples for various genres. These titles either focus on the concept of time travel or include time travel, often involving a Person in a Strange World. It’s great to see it all laid out so well. Exactly--to the minute. Both have motives aside from meeting their “love match,” and both think they’ll be able to get what they want—fast, easy, and without endangering their hearts. This is a great, concise book on story structure. Tom, One of these days I’d love to be able to come to an STC event in person (especially in January, when it’s so balmy in Burbank compared to the freezing Midwest!) Darcy is THERE in Derbyshire, too! Jessica Brody will consult on your novel and analyze your beat sheet according to the Save the Cat!® principles. Goes to the Movies is a sequel to Save the Cat! And for the Bennets’ relative, Mr. Collins, it’s finding a woman his patron, Lady Catherine (Darcy’s rich and obnoxious aunt, no less! com, Get Preptober Ready with the Save the Cat! My year of listening to the Harry Potter series has gotten me really interested in story structure. In his 20-year career as a screenwriter and producer, Blake Snyder has sold dozens of scripts, including co-writing, “To be a screenwriter is to deal with an ongoing tug of war between breathtaking megalomania and insecurity so deep it takes years of therapy just to be able to say “I’m a writer” out loud.”, “True originality can’t begin until you know what you’re breaking away from.”. Way to go, and What does this mean? If your story is lacking something, there’s a good chance it’s missing one of these elements. 6. Why is knowing which genre your story falls into so vital? And, for everyone, what are some of the books or films from your youth that most influenced your writing? The film star turned 55 on November 30, 2020, and to celebrate we take a look at his best big screen moments. By Brianne Hogan. I’ve been using the Save the Cat! is certainly no different. And a note in case some readers didn’t realize it, in the photo of me above, I’m standing right behind Jane Austen’s actual writing desk. So, for all of my fellow P&P fans out there, how did I do? Wjdf!Wfstb-!Mjlf!Gbuifs!Mjlf! Would you take cooking instruction from a chef if their meals didn't please your taste buds? Best, Tom. This book is often hyped as the bible of screenwriting, but I would take it a step further and call it the definitive go-to for all storytelling. It is, however, a shock to all of us when Darcy unexpectedly proposes to Elizabeth (badly). Think of those stereotypical snake-oil salesmen, or the Gordon Gekko wanna-bes, who dress in suits and travel around the country, renting conference rooms or even small diners and trying to convince middle-aged suburbunites to join their programm on how to be succesful. His beat sheet is great for organizing a story during drafting or revisions, and this spreadsheet makes the process easier. Also, another way to state the theme is to call it in the words of Anna Marie Quindlen, “the search for self.”. Refresh and try again. 12. She begins to investigate. Chapter/Scene Beat Sheet!) by Michael Wiese Productions, Save The Cat! Save the Date is a 2012 American romantic comedy film directed by Michael Mohan. So nice of you to add that in!! I found The Plot Whis. Plotting and structure are not my top skills, and these books often give me tools that help me chart a path through the work of telling a story. To Jane, it’s love and kindness. Blake Snyder (1957-2009) worked as a screenwriter and producer for twenty years. I confess I haven’t read the book since high school, and also failed to see the Colin Firth version (though love him, of course), but absolutely adored Joe Wright’s film adaptation which was an interesting fusion of Austen and Bronte, making Elizabeth quite comfortable out on the moors, which is something I can’t remember about the book — her “earthiness” — and is something I suspect evolved with the filmmakers. She hasn’t seen Darcy in a while and, though she respects him now, she’s quite sure she’s not secretly engaged to him. On page 75, for example, you have to have an "all is lost" moment, or a "darkest just before the dawn" moment. This was PURE speculation from beginning to end that starts out by criticizing others for taking educational and clinical approaches to the writing process. 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